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Heartland wrote:Ah, no offence kid.
Just think we can all sometimes do our heads in looking for meaning in stuff.
nora dindian wrote:Great thread. Thanks
The Secretary wrote:Yeah, BSP can be proud of Carrion. No accident that the National Maritime Museum in Greenwich put this big up on the wall. Beside Shakespeare and Coleridge! (Lakes poets massive together innit m8...)
Truth to tell tho, the "irrigate your heart" line surely owes a bit to Kapitan Kope? Here:
From Kolly Kibber's Birthday by Julian Cope
My war is a Pyrrhic victory
My mind aghast
Tears like a circular saw
Crown Prince indifference
Comes marching in
Proudly but ripped to the core
Weak and emotional, it irrigates
Half of our hearts at one time
Facts Are Right wrote:Three points. One, it's about a sunken warship, "irrigate your heart" ie filling with water. Carrion - dead sailors? Formaldehyde - preserving? but more likely to do with manufacture of high explosives (see Wikipedia). Or am I taking things too literally!
Two "When this Corpus Christic isle became a land of ocean blue" = Great Britain become the dominant world Sea Power
Three, I've seen these lyrics before and think they are wrong:
"At mentions of, no matter why," = ?? Amid fumes (or fuse) of a mile wide
"In envy of the grace we saw" = And in the earth the graves we saw
But I guess we need BSP to tell us as they never sing this last bit nowadays! Totally agree that this is just great poetry and outstanding song.
Singing Bear wrote:Lovely. Is this your work?
Twisterellla wrote:Singing Bear wrote:Lovely. Is this your work?
Thank you and yes, I've produced several BSP inspired paintings. You will find some more on the forum if you are interested. I can't write like a lot of people on here so I respond in my own way.
Singing Bear wrote:Twisterellla wrote:Singing Bear wrote:Lovely. Is this your work?
Thank you and yes, I've produced several BSP inspired paintings. You will find some more on the forum if you are interested. I can't write like a lot of people on here so I respond in my own way.
Think these are more eloquent than much of the thoughts posted here (my own included, before anyone jumps on me). Do you have your own web-site or page where you keep them all?
Skinku wrote:I like your stuff Twisterellla, keep going, cracking stuff.
I have the tools but am a tool by not getting on with it.
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